Happy Jika

I thought I would give this a try since critiques are what makes or break an artists. Since I have only seen positive critiques on your works. I assume you reject everything else. Even when a person is giving you their opinion and trying to help you improve. Since you just reject an honest critique from someone I know. But. That is getting off topic. Lets get to the actual critique shall we?

Anatomy

Your anatomy needs some work. This is coming from someone who is also working on it. The head is too big for the body. The shoulders are too far apart. These all can be fixed with some anatomy practice though.

Face

This is what gets me. You upload a lot and to be honest they all look the same. Just different hair colors and such. The mouth is too far up. You always go for the pony tail hair style. Now I am also guilty for using the same hairstyle. But 90% of your pictures have this. Try something different.

Line work

The lines have no variance which can be good or not. All your pictures suffer from this. It's fine but it is also messy I can see a couple of lines over lapping which in my mind tells me that this was rushed.

Shading

The shading for the character is all the same to me. Which it shouldn't be. Different colors have different colored shadows. Working them out can be quite a challenge but it makes the picture very dark and hard to see. Try some different shading on the face and such.



This isn't a "I don't like your art so you must stop" critique. This is a serious thing. I think you can do better and I want to help you improve. I am not attacking you. If you find this Non Constructive then I will just assume you are fishing for positive critiques. They are not supposed to be all positive. They are supposed to be equally good and bad. Pointing out where you can improve. Apparently people have forgotten what their real meaning is.

I just want you to improve and become a better artist. At the moment all your characters look the same to me and I would like to help you. Unlike the others. I am not looking for points. Take this seriously.



The Good

To be honest you can draw a centaur better than me. Mine would be a stick figure horse thing. The rate you upload is also astonishing. (Not a bad thing) Means you want to be seen and all that. I am quite the lazy artist.