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Week Of Karada X Juto Contest for DYWTB-Nothing

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This is :icondywtb-nothing: characters Karada (right) kissing Juto (left) on a cheek for good luck, I saw :icondywtb-nothing: contest on YouTube and figured maybe I should be apart of it:D

I Hope You Like It:D
 
Karada and Juto belongs to  
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Art by Me :icondsargentx:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

First i want to say is ... this is such a cute drawing!! XD (clears throat) now on with the critique XD lol

I personally really like her dress (think its a dress) I think the choice in colors makes her look elegant. Secondly i would like to point out the tip shaded mark on the boys hood i think it would be best to of taken the tip shaded point and instead done that on the curved part (but thats just me) Other than that i really love his hood thing it looks really fluffy and kind of shows what the character might be like. I love how you made him blush and accept the kiss as well, its so cute (basically i love the pose of both the characters)

The only last thing i think i would like to mention is the background i think that changing one side in one way and vise versa is to much and destroys the ambience (so takes your eyes away from the 2 characters the picture basically does not look full to me) Maybe keeping the left background on right as well would make the picture look for full (might be just me XD thu)